diff --git a/_roadmap/cloud/2020-05-01.md b/_roadmap/cloud/2020-05-01.md index b44b65f0c57b678caa6fd80edf4345925dc5324f..486566e028bbaa8df31e4e2d1ccdf3f3cb1a8f96 100644 --- a/_roadmap/cloud/2020-05-01.md +++ b/_roadmap/cloud/2020-05-01.md @@ -5,4 +5,4 @@ service: cloud --- ## 1st iteration of service selection completed -From June 2019 to May 2020, a service survey throughout all 19 Helmholtz centres has been conducted . The target of this survey was to determine which specific services are desired to be offered as services in HIFIS. A second target was to identify which centres can act as service providers for the services offered in HIFIS. +From June 2019 to May 2020, a service survey throughout all 19 Helmholtz centres has been conducted. The target of this survey was to determine which specific services are desired to be offered as services in HIFIS. A second target was to identify which centres can act as service providers for the services offered in HIFIS. diff --git a/_roadmap/cloud/2020-10-15.md b/_roadmap/cloud/2020-10-15.md index 5355256d603abfb856411620dc8e79f05d250c87..060bedf3f38498e6ee2f22570de5b538bc206ecc 100644 --- a/_roadmap/cloud/2020-10-15.md +++ b/_roadmap/cloud/2020-10-15.md @@ -5,4 +5,4 @@ service: cloud --- ## Roadmap of Integration of the initial Services -With the list of the initial service portfolio the integration of the services will start immediatly. As different services needs different steps and different time for there integration, a roadmap will be set up. +After the list of the initial service portfolio has been completed, the integration of these services will start immediatly. As different services require different steps and different time to integrate, a roadmap will be established. diff --git a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-01-01.md b/_roadmap/cloud/2021-01-01.md index 3ba1a345ab469d67890668b2726482c2d298f694..00e328a0387115f38f6d674c6bd31353ba414998 100644 --- a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-01-01.md +++ b/_roadmap/cloud/2021-01-01.md @@ -5,4 +5,4 @@ service: cloud --- ## Start evaluation of further Services -While the integration of the initial service portfolio will be continued the evaluation of further services will start. +While the integration of the initial service portfolio will continue, the evaluation of further services will start.