From 212c02460f6d7fc7b8589fd7ae1eef1fc1972ec9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tobias Huste <t.huste@hzdr.de>
Date: Wed, 28 Apr 2021 15:18:47 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Further refine the services page

---
 services/index.md                      | 7 +++++++
 services/software/communities.md       | 6 ++----
 services/software/consulting.html      | 9 ++-------
 services/software/helmholtzgitlab.html | 9 ++-------
 services/software/training.md          | 2 +-
 5 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/services/index.md b/services/index.md
index 382d23bd8..ea56c3742 100644
--- a/services/index.md
+++ b/services/index.md
@@ -10,6 +10,10 @@ author: none
 
 
 ## Software
+The service portfolio of HIFIS Software is structured into 4 different
+components that seamlessly interoperate with each other:
+Education & Training, Technology, Consulting and Community Services.
+
 <div class="flex-cards">
 {%- assign posts = site.pages | where_exp: "item", "item.path contains 'services/software'" -%}
 {% for post in posts -%}
@@ -20,6 +24,9 @@ author: none
 ## Backbone
 
 ## Guidelines
+The optimal use of online collaboration tools is prerequisite for successful
+research and especially in times of social distancing.
+We provide guidelines and helping information.
 
 <div class="flex-cards">
 {%- assign posts = site.categories['guidelines'] | where: "lang", "en" -%}
diff --git a/services/software/communities.md b/services/software/communities.md
index 5b772647b..126d8b851 100644
--- a/services/software/communities.md
+++ b/services/software/communities.md
@@ -6,8 +6,6 @@ author: none
 additional_css:
     - title/service-title-buttons.css
 excerpt:
-  "HIFIS Software builds and fosters communities to support the necessary
-  cultural change in science when dealing with research software.
-  We will build and run an exchange network between the Helmholtz centers 
-  and will also provide guidance on how to build communities of practice."
+  "We build and foster communities to support the necessary
+  cultural change in science when dealing with research software."
 ---
diff --git a/services/software/consulting.html b/services/software/consulting.html
index 297e7b5bb..f3f64c108 100644
--- a/services/software/consulting.html
+++ b/services/software/consulting.html
@@ -6,13 +6,8 @@ author: none
 additional_css:
     - services/consulting-help-images.css
 excerpt: >-
-    HIFIS offers free-of-charge consulting as a service
-    to research groups under the Helmholtz umbrella.
-    We can help you to deal with specific licensing issues,
-    pointing out solutions on how to improve your software or
-    setting up a new projects. We are also very happy to discuss
-    other software engineering topics such as software engineering 
-    process in general.
+    We offer free-of-charge consulting in software engineering
+    as a service to research groups under the Helmholtz umbrella.
 ---
 
 <p>
diff --git a/services/software/helmholtzgitlab.html b/services/software/helmholtzgitlab.html
index 3cd6208cb..6b80dbaa9 100644
--- a/services/software/helmholtzgitlab.html
+++ b/services/software/helmholtzgitlab.html
@@ -6,13 +6,8 @@ author: none
 additional_css:
     - services/services-page-images.css
 excerpt: >-
-    HIFIS Software provides a sustainable, well integrated and easy to
-    use technology infrastructure for scientific software development. 
-    You, as a researcher, are accompanied during the complete life cycle
-    (from idea to publication) of your research software through technology
-    services.
-    The central point is a free-of-charge Helmholtz-wide GitLab service
-    that is available to all people within the Helmholtz Association and their partners.
+    We provide a sustainable, well integrated and easy to
+    use technology infrastructure for scientific software.
 ---
 
 <p>
diff --git a/services/software/training.md b/services/software/training.md
index e8079808b..241fa1ad7 100644
--- a/services/software/training.md
+++ b/services/software/training.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: none
 additional_css:
     - title/service-title-buttons.css
 excerpt:
-  "In Education & Training we offer courses, materials or workshops to help you
+  "We offer courses, materials or workshops to help you
   in getting started or in boosting your software engineering practice."
 ---
 
-- 
GitLab