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From: "Annette Spicker (HZB)" <annette.spicker@helmholtz-berlin.de>
Date: Tue, 14 Dec 2021 15:55:28 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Complete new version of text, replacing the first draft

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-  It is our absolute pleasure to announce, that since Dec 10th 2021 we offer 20 Helmholtz Cloud Services.    
+  In the last few weeks, 10 new services were published at Helmholtz Cloud Portal. 
 
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-### New Helmholtz Cloud Services
-In the Helmholtz Cloud, members of the Helmholtz Association of German Research Centres provide selected IT-Services for joint use.
-The Service Portfolio covers the whole scientific process and offers Helmholtz employees and their project partners a federated community cloud with uniform access for them to conduct and support excellent science. [Read more!]({% link services/cloud/Helmholtz_cloud.md %})
+### 20 Helmholtz Cloud Services available
+In the recent weeks, 10 additional services were brought online. With this increase, the number of services available has more than doubled over the course of the year.
 
-It is our absolute pleasure to announce that since Dec 10<sup>th</sup> 2021, we offer 20 Helmholtz Cloud Services. The services are provided by seven Helmholtz Centres and cover a comfortable range of science service categories. Have a look at [Helmholtz Cloud Portal](https://cloud.helmholtz.de/services). 
+The complete Helmholtz Cloud Service Catalogue in the [Helmholtz Cloud Portal](https://cloud.helmholtz.de/services) now comprises a total of 20 services provided by seven Helmholtz Centres. A broad spectrum of service categories around the entire scientific process is covered.   
 
+#### 10 new Helmholtz Cloud Services
 * Compute Projects by Jülich
 * HAICORE by Jülich
 * HIFIS Events by DESY
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