From 84c6b9074bce2ba0ab8f813616f7fda1af6a4be4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Laura Schollmaier <laura.schollmaier@helmholtz-berlin.de>
Date: Wed, 17 Mar 2021 11:06:41 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Adapted Wording in Service Portfolio Milestones, deleted
 milestone with process manual in 12.2021 that seems to be doubled with the
 milestone in 11.2021

---
 _roadmap/cloud/2021-04-01-service-evaluation.md     | 2 +-
 _roadmap/cloud/2021-07-01-deprovisioning.md         | 2 +-
 _roadmap/cloud/2021-09-01-Service-Selection.md      | 4 ++--
 _roadmap/cloud/2021-12-01-process-manual.md         | 8 --------
 _roadmap/cloud/2022-01-01-review-cloud-portfolio.md | 4 ++--
 5 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
 delete mode 100644 _roadmap/cloud/2021-12-01-process-manual.md

diff --git a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-04-01-service-evaluation.md b/_roadmap/cloud/2021-04-01-service-evaluation.md
index cbce083c4..0b976a9f5 100644
--- a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-04-01-service-evaluation.md
+++ b/_roadmap/cloud/2021-04-01-service-evaluation.md
@@ -6,4 +6,4 @@ service: cloud
 
 ## Start evaluation of further Services
 While the integration of the initial service portfolio will continue, the evaluation of further services will start. 
-This process will presumably involve the review of service selection criteria, focusing on service usage and optimal user experience.
+This process will presumably involve the review of postponed services from the initial service selection as well as service selection criteria, focusing on service usage and optimal user experience.
diff --git a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-07-01-deprovisioning.md b/_roadmap/cloud/2021-07-01-deprovisioning.md
index 05e8758fb..a8737f40a 100644
--- a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-07-01-deprovisioning.md
+++ b/_roadmap/cloud/2021-07-01-deprovisioning.md
@@ -5,4 +5,4 @@ service: cloud
 ---
 
 ## Deprovisioning of users for at least one service
-The automatic deprovisioning of users is described as documentation and technically implemented for at least one service (cooperation with Backbone AAI).
\ No newline at end of file
+The automatic deprovisioning of users is described as documentation and technically implemented for at least one service (cooperation with Backbone AAI).
diff --git a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-09-01-Service-Selection.md b/_roadmap/cloud/2021-09-01-Service-Selection.md
index 09b89057e..8fd5ca18d 100644
--- a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-09-01-Service-Selection.md
+++ b/_roadmap/cloud/2021-09-01-Service-Selection.md
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ title: Tasks in Sept 2021
 service: cloud
 ---
 
-## New Services selected
-Services, that were postponed during the initial service selection, as well as newly applied services were evaluated based on the onboarding process of the cloud portal process. 
+## Postponed services from initial service selection transferred into new onboarding process
+Services, that were postponed during the initial service selection, as well as newly applied services were transferred into the onboarding process for new Helmholtz Cloud services. 
diff --git a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-12-01-process-manual.md b/_roadmap/cloud/2021-12-01-process-manual.md
deleted file mode 100644
index 49be2d642..000000000
--- a/_roadmap/cloud/2021-12-01-process-manual.md
+++ /dev/null
@@ -1,8 +0,0 @@
----
-date: 2021-12-01
-title: Tasks in Dec 2021
-service: cloud
----
-
-## Cloud Service Process Manual
-The cloud service portfolio process framework will be agreed upon and will be used for the maintenance and further strengthening of the service portfolio.
diff --git a/_roadmap/cloud/2022-01-01-review-cloud-portfolio.md b/_roadmap/cloud/2022-01-01-review-cloud-portfolio.md
index f283ad04f..013e677a5 100644
--- a/_roadmap/cloud/2022-01-01-review-cloud-portfolio.md
+++ b/_roadmap/cloud/2022-01-01-review-cloud-portfolio.md
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ title: Tasks in Jan 2022
 service: cloud
 ---
 
-## Review of Initial Cloud Service Portfolio
-The initial set of cloud services will be reviewed. The results will enter the annual HIFIS report and further service portfolio maintenance.
+## Initial Review of Cloud Service Portfolio
+The current set of cloud services will be reviewed. The results will enter the annual HIFIS report and further service portfolio maintenance.
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