Content feedback for v 1.1.0

• “…on these pages please visit…” would be easier to read with a comma between ‘pages’ and ‘please’ (style point). (explore page)
• add clarifying text to contributors page to say that there is random ordering
• last sentence doesn’t quite work: would be better with “…the laboratory and the information systems…” (added ‘the’) the bit after the comma (“…and of our community” etc) doesn’t make sense. The weblinks are the connections of our community? Need a different word instead of ‘of’. “…and ___ our communtiy taking both these needs into account.” indicate, show, allow (our community to take…), facilitate, symbolize, demonstrate. Depends exactly what it’s trying to say, which I’m not sure about! (About page)
• “Our adopters page provides examples…”, does it? To me this a list of organisations, there are no examples shown. Maybe rephrase to “Our adopters page provides links to organizations who have adopted our terminology, each of which contains examples of how it is technically implemented.” (if this is the case) (about page)
• should the line “If you want to stay informed…” be its own line and not a bullet point? The next two bullets folow on from it. Or these two should be second-order bullets. (about page) (this is potentially fixed and needs to be checked)