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-title: "Cloud Service Application Form now available in Plony"
+title: "plony enables online application for new cloud services"
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 date: 2021-09-02
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-    We are happy to announce that the Application form for potential Helmholtz Cloud Services is now available in Plony!
+    We are happy to announce that the Application Form for potential Helmholtz Cloud Services is now online available in Plony!
 
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-It is available at [**plony.helmholtz-berlin.de**](https://plony.helmholtz-berlin.de).
-You can log in using Helmholtz AAI.
+The application of a new cloud service is the first step of the entire Helmholtz cloud service portfolio management. Plony will be extended continuously to cover further process steps.[**plony.helmholtz-berlin.de**](https://plony.helmholtz-berlin.de).
 
 ## Register your Services for Helmholtz Cloud
 
-This means that from now on, you can hand in your services for Helmholtz Cloud at any time!
+This means that from now on, as a service provicer you can hand in your services for Helmholtz Cloud at any time!
 You find an instruction on the Application Form on the landing page of Plony.
 
 #### Features of Plony in general and Application Form specifically: