Merge branch 'cloud-polish-summary' into 'master'

Cloud - Polish summary and outlook section

See merge request !146

report/sec/hifis-cloud-text.tex

@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ With respect to the beforementioned findings, it may remain of interest to extra
 \paragraph{Typical collaboration partners vary between groups.}
 To no great surprise, but with clear evidence, collaboration with (German) universities is key for Helmholtz researchers.
 This also applies to active software developers.
-For non-researchers and/or non-software developers, collaboration with other Helmholtz centres is most prominent. Collaboration between Helmholtz centres and other partners seems to play a significant role in terms of collaboration on documents, while within the own Helmholtz centre the scientists seem to get what they need.
+For non-researchers and/or non-software developers, collaboration with other Helmholtz centres is most prominent. Collaboration between Helmholtz centres and other partners seems to play a significant role in terms of collaboration on documents.
 For seamless use of Cloud services, also European scientists, universities and industrial partners need to be considered.
 
 \paragraph{Protection of confidential data is priority.}